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Open Poetry #43
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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2008-08-01 03:03 PM


Few words…
Parting
Silence –
From your lips I hear the
Muse.

And write the moment now.
© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18
Posts 175
Ont. Canada
1 posted 2008-08-01 03:35 PM

From reception, to infusion, to creation. A profoundly simple poem that speaks for poetry.
I particularly like the line break that divides then and now.
These few lines could make one wax poetic for eons...

Amazing...
The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
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EL, Michigan
2 posted 2008-08-01 04:13 PM

Simple yet beautiful. Your sentiments are awesome indeed. Enjoyed.

JNS
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3 posted 2008-08-01 05:36 PM

Simple but effective, Eric
                Ida
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