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Fix You
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Fix You |
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Street Poet Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 82 |
She tried her best but didn't succeed The realities of the world have broken her heart I see she's in a time of need She said she's so stressed that she can't sleep Her life is going in reverse I hate seeing her so hurt She's beginning to smile less and less Mental health issues are starting to manifest I feel helpless I don't know what to do As the love of her life I told her baby don't worry Because I'm going to try my best... to fix you |
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Lady Ayla Member
since 2008-07-19
Posts 84WV, United States |
That's so sad. The last lines almost made me cry. |
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CMP Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 22England |
Tis is really a loving, thoughful poem...heartfelt. |
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