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a sea is born
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a sea is born |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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A sea is born ==================== Grievances erode in a tide of passionate cry. Her hand is a warm pressure on a feeble shoulder. It is so long since you have lost some salt-water. A sea is born. ======================== clever talks delay friendship! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
so beautifully expressed dear Ku... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Ku, the new born sea is so peaceful and glowing in love. This is a delightful poetic creation! Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Brilliantly written, poet! To pack so much in so few words, is true poetic artistry! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you have a unique style which i llike |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful, sensitive write, Ku. i See you growing as a writer right before my eyes. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Written!  ARCTIC WIND |
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scorpio eyes shut Junior Member
since 2008-07-24
Posts 31kerala, india |
this is great writing. very poignant. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Poddar, This is simply beautiful. Lovely. Alison |
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