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Open Poetry #43
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Fade
Junior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 38
on a (temporall) plane
0 posted 2008-08-13 02:23 PM


a hope.
a wish.
a dream.

a small seed
in a grand scheme
of things

that could
or would
or quite possibly
should be.
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The Shadow in Blue
Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493
EL, Michigan
1 posted 2008-08-13 02:26 PM

and it is.

I liked the style of your poem. Simple yet sweet. Welcome to PIP.

Jill
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2008-08-13 02:36 PM

Most often they indeed should be but I'm inclined to think there are "soul" agendas that decree otherwise.  Still, seeds can grow, you know, if given sufficient attention.  Enjoyed!

Helen
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-08-13 03:45 PM

I agree with Dear Helen!- Enjoyed the Write


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