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Open Poetry #43

Treasures Of The Heart

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-08-21 01:33 PM

Treasures Of The Heart

As my heart became a loom
When creating this tapestry
I had stitched threads of you
As I wove them around me

With loving textures blending
As I connected each thread
Here among my heartstrings
Its woven in passionate red

Love woven strand by strand
With a heart devoted to you
For inspiration you gave me
Enhanced the colourful hue

While weaving togetherness
Love created a work of art
Attached with forever bonds
In the treasures of the heart

Hope 2008

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-08-21 05:40 PM

Dear Hope, you weaved a very lovely heartsong here!

A poetic treasure.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

2 posted 2008-08-22 10:46 PM

While weaving togetherness
Love created a work of art
Attached with forever bonds
In the treasures of the heart

Yes it is a poetic treasure Hope
You wrote it well, enjoyed.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-08-22 10:53 PM

Yo HopeS,

What you've written on your heart is very true.

Good work Hon.

Love Bobby

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

4 posted 2008-08-22 11:16 PM

lovely, Hope, really good

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