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Open Poetry #43
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Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes
0 posted 2008-08-27 03:17 PM


My breeze

Your my breeze that I inhale
sinking deep into the depths
of my heart

beating rapidly
through tides of love
then exhaling
onto the shores
of my lips


xoxo
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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2008-08-28 11:23 AM

Lovely flow of words!


ARCTIC WIND
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2008-08-28 12:16 PM

I have said it before and I will say it again ... When you mix romance with nature (especially the ocean ) then you can't fail in beauty.
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