| Open Poetry #43 |
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More Than Just a Word |
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MsMelissaMae Junior Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 26Indianola, Iowa |
As I watch his eyes smile I slip my arms around his soul My prized lily of the Nile Is my only form of self control So close that I can feel his heat But far enough to have to reach Now I know of each heartbeat A talent only time can teach For I have never seen so well Even with my eyes so blurred I know his presence by his smell When love is more than just a word |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Quite beautiful and captivating first entry! Welcome MelissaMae to Pipland! Love, Margherita ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; I am mastered totally by Love." (Rumi) [This message has been edited by Margherita (08-28-2008 08:53 AM).] |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
enchanting! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Melissa. Please, check your Email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
![]() WELCOME TO PIP ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
-------------------------------------------- For I have never seen so well Even with my eyes so blurred I know his presence by his smell When love is more than just a word -------------------------------------------- That last verse is the perfect way to wrap up the thoughts you shared with us. I enjoyed very much and "WELCOME TO PIP" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome aboard the pip ship, MsMelissaMae! I know you will enjoy sailing these seas of blue! Indeed, love IS "More Than Just a Word"! ~ as you have so beautifully illustrated! ![]() Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel ![]() |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
This is my first time here and this is the first poem I saw. They say first impressions count and if the rest of the site lives up to this I will be pleased that I have become a member. Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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MsMelissaMae Junior Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 26Indianola, Iowa |
Thank you all for your kind words and your great welcomes, the talent in these forums amazes me, and I am very excited to be apart of this word loving community! |
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