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Dark Poetry #5
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pandabear
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since 2009-03-08
Posts 36
0 posted 2009-03-11 12:48 PM

I sit alone
With no one by my side
Hoping and dreaming that someday someone might be next to me
And not walk right past me
But, until that day
I sit here alone
Hoping and dreaming my wish will someday come true
© Copyright 2009 Kara - All Rights Reserved
pandabear
Junior Member
since 2009-03-08
Posts 36
1 posted 2009-03-11 12:50 PM

Plz tell me if i would need to fix anything cuz i think i didnt do so well on this one
angelfacegurl
Member
since 2008-04-17
Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI
2 posted 2009-03-17 01:04 PM

ya well...I'm not gonna judge you we all mess up but your right it does need some work.

Brittany
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