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Dark Poetry #5
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wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
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0 posted 2009-04-25 08:10 PM


* this is a haiku im not sure if its any good*

belittled and small
i cry out for someones help
but alas i fall
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prize
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since 2008-11-21
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1 posted 2009-04-26 11:07 AM


I like it a lot - sometimes few words express a great deal.  Haiku's give you that power, and I think you've done a nice job expressing the pain felt when nobody is there for you. I felt it when I read your poem.  Thank you ~P
wolfy09
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2 posted 2009-04-28 09:35 PM

thank you very much for reading and commenting
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