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Dark Poetry #5
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easy1
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0 posted 2010-10-18 03:13 PM




A generation
of climatologists spoiled,
like boys from Brazil.

I won't dehumanize them,
but they work for criminals.


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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2010-10-22 01:24 AM

I like this piece and the shortness doesn't detract I just like to see you expand on this a bit
littlemonster
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2 posted 2010-11-06 06:32 AM

The shortness serves its purpose, it is to the point and projects its harshness.
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