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Dark Poetry #5
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littlemonster
Junior Member
since 2010-05-06
Posts 39
UK
0 posted 2010-11-09 03:23 PM

I fold inward

turning edges up
to prevent
them catching.

Sharpening the creases
that blunt
the luminous ache.

I fold again
till I am small.
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Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
1 posted 2010-11-09 04:46 PM

I love it! So very much said, in so few words.
~A
Chavo.wavo
Junior Member
since 2010-11-13
Posts 15
2 posted 2010-11-13 01:57 PM

It makes alot of sense. I love the way you wrote that. Great visuals and great meaning.
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2010-12-28 09:17 AM

Two things... First, Little Monsters CAN be Queen, I beg to differ. But that's another matter. And number one, people should be scared of you. VERY scared. What cutting brilliance your mind displays!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·
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