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Dark Poetry #5
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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
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0 posted 2010-12-10 02:15 PM


Dropping down abruptly from the sky
Banging into the solid dirt
Tears of blood draining through my eyes
But I cannot feel, I am numb

Opening my eyes; I can see
Through the ignorance and the hostility
I raise from under where I have fallen
Oh, the excellence of your defeat ļ
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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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1 posted 2010-12-28 08:45 AM

This is still working itself out in my head but I really like it.

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