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Dark Poetry #5
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littlemonster
Junior Member
since 2010-05-06
Posts 39
UK
0 posted 2011-04-27 04:39 PM


I think God forgot
to wrap her bones.

Missed off
the outer layers
of existance.

So all that was
exposed
was the twine
holding her together.

I think God forgot
to wrap her bones.
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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-04-27 09:18 PM

Stunningly well writen and beautifully sad. The mental image created by your words is haunting. I love it!
littlemonster
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since 2010-05-06
Posts 39
UK
2 posted 2011-04-28 03:30 PM

Thank you for your kind words.

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