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Dark Poetry #5
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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
0 posted 2011-10-31 10:39 PM


I'm nothing
I'm $h1t
I'm worthless
I will never be enough

Not good enough
Not smart enough
Not talented enough
Not pretty enough
Not funny enough
Not outwardly happy enough
Not nice enough

Not. Enough.
I will never be enough...
A sad fact I must accept.

But who can care
When no one is willing to listen
And I am unwilling to tell
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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-11-05 10:39 AM

This is a very powerful poem. It is not too wordy, it is condensed into forceful little lines that slap you across the face and demand attention. I love it!
pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
2 posted 2011-11-05 03:41 PM

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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