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Dark Poetry #5
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ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
0 posted 2009-01-28 03:29 PM


The wind takes me,
spreading me scattered.

Little pieces,
none to connect.

Couldn't piece me back together,
no connection remains.

On the wings of the wind,
scattered I remain.
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prize
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since 2008-11-21
Posts 116
1 posted 2009-02-02 12:15 PM

Thanks ladylisa,

This short poem says a lot.

Scattered.

Yes, that is how it is for a lot of us now and after death.

Thanks for this powerful poem.  P
GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
2 posted 2009-02-17 08:55 AM

I really enjoyed this one
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
3 posted 2010-02-18 02:22 PM

Scattered into many pieces, each of us.
Truth here lisa.

Enjoying you in the archives.
ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
4 posted 2010-03-05 02:00 AM

thank you, be careful they're scary, lol
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