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A bird will cry, A man will die
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A bird will cry, A man will die |
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rachel_anubis Junior Member
since 2011-03-24
Posts 43 |
A bird cries in the silent night, A man screams in sudden plight, A bird soars through the tar-black sky A car glides a dead man by A bird lands on a frosted branch A torch glows on a lonely ranch A bird tucks under its black wings A fox sniffs the last of his gold rings A bird blinks it's eyes in the soft moons light A lantern lies silent in a broken kite A birds black feather glides down to land A mans bleached bones are covered with sand [This message has been edited by rachel_anubis (11-15-2011 06:18 PM).] |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
The imagery is so powerful and potent, I love the simplicity of it. It is condensed down into such powerful lines and meaning. Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. |
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