I want a house that is me!

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Teen Poetry #9

I want a house that is me!

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2010-03-19 02:23 AM

Just a poetry exercise I decided to do.

I want a house with many rooms,
Some small and some huge,
With many doors and many walls
That change color
To fit my mood.

I want a house without locks,
In a neighborhood without the need
Of a neighborhood watch,
Without fences or gates
Just a front yard
With wide open space.

I want a house filled with fish
And guinea pigs that feed themselves,
With a dog doing tricks
And a cat chasing a mouse.

I want a house that is me,
With glistening lights
In every room,
With the simple beauty
Of cherry blossoms
Beginning to bloom.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2010-03-20 02:36 AM

No worries, I don't get discouraged easily, anyways. Thanks for the comment.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2010-03-21 01:38 PM

Christine, I enjoyed this poem very much, in fact it had inspired me to write one as well

. thanks for the inspiration! writers block for months!
Krysti

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

4 posted 2010-03-21 07:50 PM

ahh in a perfect world..

Loved this poem, well written

-Lee

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

5 posted 2010-03-22 10:43 AM

Thanks!!!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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