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Teen Poetry #9
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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30
Posts 222
Oregon
0 posted 2010-08-02 01:20 AM

Snowflakes falling,
softly falling
on a world of grey.

Small breeze calling,
gently calling
on a cloud-strewn day.

Drifting, sifting,
slightly shifting.
Falling swiftly down.

Tilting, lilting,
never wilting.
Flow'rs of winter's crown.

Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light!
L: Yes, that would be dark.
© Copyright 2010 Melissa Reneé Axtell - All Rights Reserved
freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2010-08-16 06:33 PM

Nice poem! It had a good rhythm to it!

"When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car"  
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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2011-01-02 06:05 AM

Bravo!

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