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Teen Poetry #9
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ForgottenWorks
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0 posted 2009-02-13 02:23 AM

Untold

I'm an open wound that wont stop bleeding
A smile that hides the pain I'm feeling
So many eyes but no one seeing
They're the cause of my untold dreaming
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1 posted 2009-02-13 09:27 AM

Oh wow. I can connect to this short poem very well. Great work! I like it

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.
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2 posted 2009-02-15 10:51 AM

I love this one! It's not long but it sums up the emotions very well! Library.
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