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Teen Poetry #9
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lilmissflyaway
Junior Member
since 2009-01-19
Posts 15
ohio,usa
0 posted 2009-02-25 12:56 PM


its all been
bulidin up
jailin up
as your in there
what do i do
do i move on
or wait patiently
with all this hurt
buking up inside a me
you were there
when i was weak
but you didnt give me the same considersation
to be there for you
there was no goodbye
it was bust at school
and i had to hear from it from my friends
you didnt trust me
you left me wondering
what to with all the lies
everythings just
building up
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kiwie15:D
Junior Member
since 2009-03-05
Posts 13
california
1 posted 2009-03-11 11:07 PM

i like this poem could use a little work but really good.

                     always
                         kiwie
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