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Teen Poetry #9
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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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0 posted 2009-03-09 08:59 PM


I was so
Indecisive,
I’m sorry.

I chose you,
Ate your fruit,
But then realized,
It was rotten.

I’m sorry,
But I had to
Spit it out.

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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pandabear
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since 2009-03-08
Posts 36
1 posted 2009-03-09 09:48 PM

good job
GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
2 posted 2009-03-10 10:01 AM

Wow, I really enjoyed this hun. Nice idea and short.
freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
3 posted 2009-03-10 02:47 PM

Thanks!

With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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