Diary Entry (not exactly a poem)

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Teen Poetry #9

Diary Entry (not exactly a poem)

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

0 posted 2009-03-16 09:42 PM

The crimson pellets fall
for sheer thoughtless mistakes.
Shouting “Help!” a soundless call.
No one hears as skin cells break.

It’s a cursed addiction I must stop,
yet I barely make it day to day…
Passing through life to eavesdrop,
on my own whispers, as I decay.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-03-16 09:56 PM

"Passing through life to eavesdrop,
on my own whispers, as I decay"

I'm sorry hon, I hope your doing better.. But that line above is like my favorite line of the day. lol

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2009-03-16 09:59 PM

Yeaaa, I'm not.

&& the 'I decay' part was sort of meant also as like in IM as 'IDK' because i feel like I know nothing.

Thanks.

Octave
Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

3 posted 2009-03-18 01:01 PM

Very, very pretty. Hope you're feeling better. Hang in there.

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

4 posted 2009-03-22 01:00 PM

I absolutely love this. It's so perfectly written. Excellent job.

Cierra

Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

5 posted 2009-03-22 07:52 PM

i hope everything is okay, enjoyed

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