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Teen Poetry #9

If Different is Wrong...

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2009-06-01 12:25 PM

If different is wrong then I guess
We're all wrong. To someone in the world
We're wrong.
If different is wrong then what eye-color is right?
Blue? Green? And hair; short or long?
Black, blonde, red, brown?
What color's right? Orange, pink? What hue?
If different is wrong then who's the "right" person?
Not me, or you; you. Maybe you?
If different is wrong, which way is different?
The ways that leaves or the way that came?
In one we relate: everyone's different.
In this one way everyone's the same.
If different is wrong then I guess
We're all wrong.
Is different really wrong?

nehematala
Member

since 2009-05-21

Posts 129

1 posted 2009-06-01 08:43 PM

wow missy that is so true I never looked at being different like that

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-06-02 07:14 PM

Oh I noticed something like that long ago. Great write! But one suggestion, i think it might help the reader if you space out your stanza's. It's just a suggestion.

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

3 posted 2009-06-03 11:12 AM

Thanks for the advice!=^.^= I never really thought about that.
~UNTAMEDelegance~

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