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Falling again . . .
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Falling again . . . |
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Astrophial New Member
since 2009-08-10
Posts 6 |
Well, what the heck. I'm head over heels, I'm falling again. I can't forget what it felt like. Everything that happened. I liked it too much, when your arms were around me. I liked it too much, those moments together. I liked it too much, Letting it all out. But it hurts too much, to fall in love all over again. Comments totally appreciated, don't be afraid to be harsh. |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
Good job, I like it, the tone is set up expertly. Maybe adding a couple lines at the end with some hope in them? Hang in there Rileigh |
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