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Teen Poetry #9
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benjamenbutton09
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since 2009-01-02
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0 posted 2009-01-17 12:04 PM

we fell part so many times
it was always my fault
i did the crimes
im truly sorry
i know well never be again
but i just want you to know
that still i love you
just never again
we should just stay friends
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1 posted 2009-01-17 11:58 AM

Welcome to Pip! I like where your going with this. I'd work a little bit more on it. It sounds sorta unfinished but its still good!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.
benjamenbutton09
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2 posted 2009-01-19 11:08 AM

thanks..
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