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before i forget
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before i forget |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
he tells me that im perfect the girl he's been looking for but he's to scared to commit and i cant help but ask for more i told him that i'd wait until he could understand i told him if he needed i'd always lend a helping hand he thinks im going to wreck him and i think he'll break my heart is there grounds to build a love that was doomed from the start? do you want to love me i need to know right now so i can learn to let you go before i forget how... |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
"he thinks im going to wreck him and i think he'll break my heart is there grounds to build a love that was doomed from the start? do you want to love me i need to know right now so i can learn to let you go before i forget how..." oh my god... THIS IS BRILLIANT Hun!!  Love this! Library. -Zach |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
thank you Zach |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
I thought it was well written myself. Beautifully captured. |
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