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Teen Poetry #9
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Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
Posts 79
0 posted 2009-10-12 06:58 PM

Bones shattered across the floor,
there sits the weapon in the mess.
A heart that has stopped beating,
filled once with a volatile substance.
And now that it has stopped,
so has the wielder.
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priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
1 posted 2009-10-13 08:20 AM

you capture pictures very well....
intense...but meaningful...
liked it...
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