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Teen Poetry #9

dark poem

the lost poet
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since 2010-01-13

Posts 1
Texas, United States

0 posted 2010-01-13 01:03 AM

Thinking of what I did,
Looking back at all the times I bled.
Not once did you return the favor,
Not once did you murmer a thank you.

Wanting a second chance.
Not with you but to be among you,
To walk among you,
To feel and love again.

Waiting for my time again.
Another chance should be fair.
A stray bullet aiming for your heart,
Who knew i would be the one to tear.

Now im way up here, and your way down there.
I said I would die for you,
And I kept my promise.
Now im here thinking, wanting, waiting.
for a simple thank you.

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

1 posted 2010-01-13 03:33 PM

kinda choppy couldnt really keep up with it.
had to re-read a few lines. didnt really get the idea.

madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory