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Open Poetry #45
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2009-07-29 08:55 PM

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What shall we do
My friend
Our time has come

Leap of course

What else
Old man
Given then

Is worthy
Of our names


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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-07-30 05:09 AM

The leap sounds very good in this context.

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Oklahoma Rose
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2 posted 2009-07-31 09:54 PM

I like the way you wrote this.
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