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Open Poetry #45

trembling with the dawn

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-06-13 11:53 PM

trembling with the dawn

life has come and gone
like a dream within a dream;
I am the brittle tumbleweed
trembling with the dawn.

--- b. e adams (6/13/2009)

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (06-14-2009 12:07 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2009-06-14 12:18 PM

Excellent analogy and so very well said!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-06-14 01:40 AM

Bruce,

You write so well - and I am hanging on to each poem you share to make sure that you don't blow away and disappear.

Your friend,
Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-06-14 11:27 AM

Beautiful thoughts and imagery, dear Bruce.

You do perceive the unity of all things.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2009-06-14 06:04 PM

This one is special, Bruce, another keeper.
Ida

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2009-06-14 06:16 PM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

This is a nice poem. Let's hope that life hangs around for a while.

Bobby

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