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Falling in Love Alone.
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Falling in Love Alone. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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I fell in lust with you, covered in lavender scars partially mostly done healing. Soapy bubbles filled with origami love notes, I folded the lofty dreams involving you and released them to the wind. I took hold of the glass around a recently blown-out candle. If not for calluses, I'd have been burned. __________________________________ Bad Habits. Paul I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is a very visual poem. I like it and like the vulnerability you show that lurks underneath that calloused exterior.  Ali |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
tender side up for sure.  always a joy to read you |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Alaboo... Thanks. I can't help it if my hands are rough.  SEA... Yeah, yeah. :P I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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