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Open Poetry #45
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2009-09-06 06:35 PM

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Ah September moon—
How you make up
For so much wrong


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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2009-09-06 07:29 PM

fine Zenesque truth indeed!

applause for this 'penning' !
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2009-09-06 08:45 PM

Totally. I love the moon. A big message for such a small amount of words.


ARCTIC WIND
brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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nowhere and everywhere
3 posted 2009-09-07 12:08 PM


this is nice

    
GBride
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since 2009-07-02
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4 posted 2009-09-08 06:04 AM

Coolist poem!!!
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2009-09-08 06:08 AM

Yes! I have seen it rising, enormous and red.

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