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brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

0 posted 2009-09-08 05:09 PM

trusting
the strength
in your grip

on the handle
of things

tethers me

a kite
on a string

flying freely

yet never
so high
I am
lost

nor ever
without
a way
down

back to
your arms
on the
ground

rewound

.

[This message has been edited by brneyedgrly (09-08-2009 06:20 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-09-08 05:18 PM

Shellie, I understand this and I love how you wrote about it!

SAVED

I'm so happy that you're back! I've been enjoying reading your fresh and new perspectives. You're another Molly (Brown) by golly!

Loveya ss,

Linda

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-09-08 05:33 PM

Absolutely delightful, dear Shellie!

Love and joy.
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2009-09-08 05:41 PM

Browneyes

It is a pleasure to see the woman of you dancing this way

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

4 posted 2009-09-08 06:11 PM

linda

but I changed it! I hope you will re-keep me

thanks unsinkable sister

_______________

thanks for those wishes, dear 'rita

_______________

thanks ds

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

5 posted 2009-09-08 09:35 PM

Love the flow and rhythm of this, Shellie
-Brad

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2009-09-09 05:59 PM

Oh, I love the flow as well.

Very well done, and beautifully and poetically written.

to you
ARCTIC WIND

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2009-09-09 07:41 PM

I really like this!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2009-09-10 11:11 PM

I absolutely adore your spirit and way with words.

I like the idea of flying so high, yet staying within our means.

Especially love your ending....Rewound!! yea, that's what I'm talking about!!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2009-09-10 11:22 PM

brneyedgrly - you sure do write some nice stuff. Liked this one a lot. You say a lot about your feelings in your writings, and they are touching...

BC

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 360
New Orleans

10 posted 2009-09-11 01:18 AM

Beautifully captured.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2009-09-11 08:16 AM

"yet never
so high
I am
lost

nor ever
without
a way
down"

beautifully expressed, Shellie~~

M

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

12 posted 2009-09-11 09:58 AM

you bomb, dawg.
Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2009-09-11 10:28 AM

Brown-eyed Beauty ~

Shellie, I just checked my library and it appears that it is the same as your rewrite.

That's great news for me! ~ Because I'm the queen of rewrites! Now I know that when a pipster saves a poem of mine before I make any changes, they will automatically have the edited version! Yeah! Thanks, ss! Because of you, I just learned something new!

Loveya!
Linda

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

14 posted 2009-09-11 05:46 PM

"...your grip", "...tethers me", "...on a string", "rewound."

Outstanding...!!

jimmy.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

15 posted 2009-09-11 07:40 PM

thank you so much for reading

and taking time to comment

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