| Open Poetry #45 |
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Wizard Moon (reworked) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' !
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Wizard Moon Beneath a rising wizard-moon as flickering stars and clouds float by … the playful gypsy-wind mixes grand old dreams with healing evening shadows and swirling wisps of time; On this twilight cusp of Autumn, rejoice in life’s brief meteor before the ultimate winter void if, even once, by chance or cosmic favor, thou hast known love. --- b. e. adams (9/13/2009) |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think I have enjoyed every poem that you have shared. They all contain beautiful imagry and flow. Plus, there is just a bit of you in each to make them really special. Thank you for sharing with us. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree with Alison, Bruce, I don't think you've ever written anything I didn't like. This one is beautiful and I love the title. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bard Bruce "Beneath a rising wizard-moon as flickering stars and clouds float by … the playful gypsy-wind mixes grand old dreams with healing evening shadows and swirling wisps of time; On this twilight cusp of Autumn, rejoice in life’s brief meteor before the ultimate winter void if, even once, by chance or cosmic favor, thou hast known love." ![]() ![]() Linda |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Now, I thought, how could this poem get any better? but it did..loved the rework ...of course I love all your poems! ~ARH ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It is musically perfect, dear Bruce. And the tune holds a wonderful message. Love it very much. Love, Margherita |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Pure loveliness in words, almost gives me the shivers... ![]() Heart2Heart |
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