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Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
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0 posted 2009-09-29 07:19 PM

Standing tall and proud;
a strong conifer.

Mind ruling over body;
a peasant over knight.

Heads getting ahead of minds;
what a screwed up world.
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Pluto
1 posted 2009-09-29 10:47 PM

Short succinct write conveys much more than what is on the surface.

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Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
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2 posted 2009-09-30 04:09 PM

I'm sorry if I sound ignorant; but would that be a positive comment? I thought it sounded like it.
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