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Open Poetry #45

When Love Comes Calling

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2009-10-28 10:01 AM

When love comes calling
A precious garden blooms
Sweetly in the moonlight
Smiling stars wink
As delight dances
Effervescent steps
Around my heart

(prophecy)

AncientHippie
Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

1 posted 2009-10-28 10:25 AM

Lori, here is my wish that your delightful comes true for you. This has the form and feel of a beautiful, yet robust, blossom.
Thank you.
Jim

Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2009-10-28 10:55 AM

Jim, My prophecy series are poems I have written in & about other times and places that have come to their true fruition later.
There is an implied "fufilled" in front of prophecy. Thank you for you sweet wishes for me~L

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2009-10-28 01:02 PM

ms lg..I would say he is lucky to have found your windows..can see the brim of a smile in this and some of the others

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2009-10-28 01:05 PM

D-Happy camper here~L

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2009-10-28 05:47 PM

Yes, those are some of the symptoms.

Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

6 posted 2009-10-28 09:09 PM

the first two lines made me smile because they are so true and glad they fulfilled themselves for you also...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2009-10-28 09:26 PM

Margherita-thanks for the read~L
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naturegirl- Glad you REALLY liked this one! Thanks for letting me know!~L

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

8 posted 2009-10-28 11:52 PM

I have seen a Plain Jane turned beautiful--simply by falling in love...it's happened to me.

Your poem describes that phenomenon so well!

Shenachie

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