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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
0 posted 2009-11-01 02:04 AM



We figured you were sculpted
from alcohol, fire and flour
I looked at you strangely,
not to be insulting,
but to wonder how you'd taste if baked and risen.

You'd taste like Halloween I said,
and you didn't know how to take that.
I told you to take it with some candy,
and held out a piece with two fingers
that you might open your mouth.


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I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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Member Rara Avis
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2009-11-01 02:08 AM

I think Halloween tastes yummy.  And I think if you poured tequila over that costume and marinated it for awhile ...

like the poem.

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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2009-11-01 10:06 AM

ha!

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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