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Open Poetry #45
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Zeigeist
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since 2009-12-09
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0 posted 2009-12-30 02:51 AM


an old worn tree branch
stretches low to the river
children laugh and play

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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2009-12-30 09:38 AM

nice atmosphere, a vivid expression of art.

have a nice day

yann
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-12-30 01:29 PM

Vivid visual ~ and audio!

A very pleasant scenario!


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Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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Osaka, Japan
3 posted 2010-08-05 03:18 AM

A nicely written haiku with a vivid description.
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