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Open Poetry #45

Rivers and Lakes

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2009-07-04 01:45 AM

The river runs dry
tell me
what am I without a current?
pebbles and rocks

no
I will be the rain
when my river bed runs dry
I will fall
filling and growing
till I am a lake
steady and strong

my lake will not run dry

[This message has been edited by exhale (07-04-2009 03:59 PM).]

Bloodline
Member

since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

1 posted 2009-07-04 09:03 AM

Exhale, a most breathless write,
we all need this noble self will,

Bloodline

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

2 posted 2009-07-04 12:04 PM

~absolutely love this!

your spirit shines through here...and who doesn't love a girl with spirit?

nice job!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-07-04 12:15 PM

I doubt that your lake will ever run dry when you have a spirit cup that overfloweth with nourishing rain.

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This was a very special offering. Thank you for sharing your inate wisdom.

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