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The Third of July |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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You were wonderful running back and forth flashes of happy light beneath each of your tan feet The people cried out with excitement watching every explosion in this nighttime hour. I watched only you wearing those scratched plastic safety glasses filled with concern and cheap-beer laughter. _____________________________________________ Bad Habits. (series.) Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I want to see things with your eyes Paul   |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..indeed..a nice visual, captured in poetic words..thanks ..spiros |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks you two. P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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