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Open Poetry #45

Not So Fleeting

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2009-06-10 04:56 PM

And the pitcher still runs dry,
I never feel my feet touch the ground
Touch something whole, around a fleet of hair
and the memories still fly.

Wake me in the night
With my mouth Dry,
And it's 2:30, with the night alive
Like my saliva's sweat on the crinkled shirt
that posts to my abdomen,
And I fall back again,
To a day that never seems awake.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2009-06-12 08:50 PM

Wow, this is a tricky one... to a day that never seems awake.

I need to think on that, but I honestly enjoyed reading your poem.

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