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Open Poetry #45
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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2009-07-14 09:29 PM

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Oh
One must revel
In being beautiful
While she can
Though young men
Are dying

Gazing through time
Through a world
That is crying

Zutfen Holland
1917


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-15 07:01 PM

Poignant.

M
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-07-17 10:53 PM

Unparalleled, and worlds apart.

Geez, you leave so much to contemplate.

Excellent musings, as always~
GBride
Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538
3 posted 2009-07-18 09:31 AM

Loved your poem, though I didn't get the meaning. I guess I wasn't supposed to.
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2009-07-19 10:55 PM

All too often that's the way it is, John.
                                    Ida
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