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Open Poetry #47
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since 2006-06-06
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0 posted 2011-03-01 10:41 PM

Heat
Precious Heat
Warmth from day's bitter cold
Akin to Love
Which stirs forsaken Hearts
And in its Adultery
Sheathes Complacency
In Contentment
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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2011-03-02 02:51 AM

Hey this is really good.
I love how you heat it up and then poetically cool it down with a little reality.

Great stuff!

Eric

the writer views a critic like a fire hydrant would view a dog
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