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Open Poetry #47

If that was Home

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2011-03-15 08:30 PM

One fluorescent light
in the vast darkness---if that
was home, I'd be there.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2011-03-15 08:49 PM

Short but to the point, nicely done!
Kat =^..^=

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-03-15 08:51 PM

instead you wander
as the darkness closes round
causes you to scream

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

3 posted 2011-03-16 01:55 AM

thx, kat, appreciated

JP2, when one starts wandering driving the wee hours it is time for a good scream session, which gets one down the road to the next coffee and snacks pit stop.

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