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Petal Plucked
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Petal Plucked |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Petal plucked he loves me… Petal plucked he loves me not… A crazy daisy way to play with wishes fluttering down like rain LGR©3/16/11 [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (03-16-2011 09:57 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes indeed, playing the daisies is like playing the numbers racket, hardly anything good comes up. ~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Who came up with that plucking thing in the first place LOL |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Lori, Lori, Lori, you're getting a bit risque now, WildChild. ~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
LOL Jerry! Gotta love me! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is so cute and cleverly written...love it! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those last two lines? GREAT! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Faith & Sunshine! Two of my favorite pipsters! Glad you liked my little plucking poem  !Lori |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is charming and, like our Sunshine, I love the last two lines. A |
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