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Open Poetry #47

Tanka..her eyelashes

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2011-03-17 06:01 AM

her approach,
imbued by a lilac's trepidation,
vows surrender
for an eagle's wings, her
eyelashes, magnify one's awe
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..Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Harmony
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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-03-17 09:43 AM

This is lovely, Spiros.
I do believe I captured your
imagery.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-03-17 11:08 AM

Living to die / Dying so that others can live / Vicious race we seem to be in

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2011-03-17 12:14 PM

..thank you Sunshine and Jerry, for your comments; it pleases me much knowing you have read one of my poems..>>spiros

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