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Open Poetry #47

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easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2011-03-23 03:32 AM

Winter is rockets,
Spring an aeroplane humming.
Sunny airplane hum!

Having seen such frost
the blossoms come more sweetly.
A new visitor!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-03-23 09:26 AM

It is indeed amazing to witness the rebirth of nature and to welcome the new visitors. Love your idea of attributing specific sounds to the seasons. A biplane in the air means summer to me too ...

Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-03-26 11:45 PM

Nicely said - great analogies.

Alison

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2011-03-27 03:58 AM

lovely images, great inspiration, thanks easy 1 for the enjoyable write.

yann

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