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Open Poetry #47

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-03-27 03:27 PM

Snowin' again
after tease me
days of sunny
in strappy shirts
Last day of
Spring Break
in gloomy gray
changed my mind
about what to do
with today.
A whole lota nada
sounds good to me
just kickin' back
and breathe
LGR(C)3/27/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-03-27 03:41 PM

Chillin' out is good. Especially if you are breathing. Breathing is good.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-03-27 04:03 PM

I'm especially fond of the heavy kind

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-03-27 04:35 PM

This was very clever, and such a joy to read.

My kinda day!!

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-03-27 06:46 PM

just love it...hope you got to do just that

enjoyed this one a lot

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-03-27 06:58 PM

Heavy is good.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2011-03-27 07:00 PM

I'd only change a little,
but you knew I couldn't
keep it within.

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