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Open Poetry #47

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ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2011-03-30 05:18 PM

confused on what
I'm suppose to
feel right now.
I
feel strange, abit
dismembered, just
out of touch.
Odd,
it hit me like a
brick hitting
a car window. Leaves
you
shocked,frighten
confused
and mostly
displeased. I was
happy,
on top
of clouds.
So
how did I get
blown away
in
a instant
like specks
of
sand.
My head
hurts and
my feelings
are even more
hurt
for i don't know
why I'm
feeling
so
depressed.

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

1 posted 2011-03-30 09:15 PM

Alot of deep emotion in this, with your words expressed from the heart, thanks for sharing. Good read.

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