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Open Poetry #47

Resounding Assent

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

0 posted 2011-01-12 09:33 PM

Whispers from your lips,
mysteries of love and hope,
echo inside me.

© ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· 2011

Haiku! Gesundheit.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-01-12 10:34 PM

lovely...simply lovely...sigh

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2011-01-12 10:47 PM

your eyes smiling back
as I whisper from my lips
your heart beats again

Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2011-01-12 10:50 PM

Beautiful response to this haiku, Trina. Amazing.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

4 posted 2011-01-13 07:01 AM

From echo's come hope.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-01-13 08:21 AM

way keeewl haiiiiku garapan

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2011-01-13 08:24 AM

Sweet! ...and oh so romantic!
Lori

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2011-01-13 09:06 PM

Love the mystery~

Nice haiku, you~

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

8 posted 2011-01-13 10:21 PM

Thanks, everyone. Glad you came by!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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